Someone on Facebook gave their critique on my audiobook attempt and I agree with them. They liked how the voices were planned out, but noticed that a few words don't translate well from written word to audiobook format. Another enemy that prevented full enjoyment was speed as I went along with the snappy dialogue. Looking back, they're right. So, chapter 2's going to take all these into account, hopefully, and be much better. This just goes to show I need further practice.